I really enjoyed this piece. It's sketchy and unrefined and the lengthwise shadows on the table make it look as though he is in a jail cell rather than an office or wherever, which - given the mood of the piece - is fairly significant and telling of the frame of mind your character is in. Even if you didn't do it on purpose. Keep up the good work!
I sat there, listening to the world gurgle down the downspout outside my window. I wondered whether I should be having a dialogue with myself or not. I figured it didn't matter. It was my job to see just how rotten this world could get. Besides, I hated having to bring my work home with me.